2020-2021学年高中英语 Unit 1 Lifestyles Section Ⅶ Writin

Unit1LifestylesSectionⅦWriting——私人信件写作技法指导[文体指导]书信体写作需要注意三点，把握三步，掌握书信用语：一、注意三点1．开头、主体、结束三部分格式，所用语言符合书信体用语；2．人称、时态使用正确；3．要点齐全，句式多样，亮点丰富。二、把握三步写私人信件的步骤第一步：1．格式要正确。2．时态：一般现在时；人称：第一人称。第二步：整理内容要点：首先对来信进行简短评论，接着提出几条建议。第三步：连句成文：要选用恰当的词语及合适的句型，并注意使用过渡词。三、掌握书信用语注意掌握一些常见的开头语及结尾用语。[亮点句式]1．开头语：(1)Thankyouverymuchforyourletter!(2)GladtoreceiveyourletterofJuly3rd.(3)I'mgladtoreceiveyourletter.(4)Thankyouforyourletter.(5)I'mwritingtoexpress...(6)I'mwritingtoaskabout...2．正文中可能出现的表达语：(1)Isuggestyoudo...(2)Ithinkyoushould...(3)I'msureyouwill...3．结尾常用语：(1)Ihavetostopnow.(2)I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.(3)Pleasegive/sendmyregards/bestwishesto...(4)Pleaseremembermeto...满分佳作构建[写作任务]假如你是李华，近期，雾霾(dust­haze)天气频频发生，环境保护越来越受到人们的关注。作为一名青少年，我们如何尽自己的微薄之力来保护环境，请给报社写一封信。要点：1．环保受到人们更多的关注；2．环境的现状；3．应采取的措施。注意：词数100左右。词汇提示：过低碳生活livealow­carbonlife[审题谋篇]体裁书信时态一般现在时为主主题环境保护人称第一人称为主结构首段：分析写信的原因；第二段：给出建议；第三段：阐述自己的观点。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．adj.紧急的；急迫的2．vt.强调3．结果4．起作用；产生重大影响5．采取措施urgentstressasaresultmakeadifferencetakemeasuresⅡ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．近来雾霾天气多次侵袭中国北部。Recently，thedust­hazeweather_______________________________________．2．雾霾天气对人们的生活和健康产生重大影响。Thedust­hazeweather_________________________________________．hadagreateffectonpeople'slifeandhitthenorthofChinaoverandoveragainhealth3．我认为急需我们采取措施保护环境。Ithinkweshouldtakesomemeasurestoprotectourenvironment.4．做我们能做的来影响我们周围的人——步行或骑自行车上班或上学。________________toinfluencepeoplearoundustogotoworkorschoolonfootorbybike.5．就我而言，我们采取的每一建议都很重要。AsfarasI'mconcerned，reallycounts.everysmallstepwetakeitisurgentthatDoallthatwecan(二)句式升级6．Thedevelopmentofindustryandheavytrafficjamshavecausedairpollution.(改为强调句)________________________________________________thathavecausedairpollution.7．Thatweshouldtakesomemeasurestoprotectourenvironmentisurgent.(it作形式主语)________________weshouldtakesomemeasurestoprotectourenvironment.ItisurgentthatItisthedevelopmentofindustryandheavytrafficjams8．Doallthatwecantoinfluencepeoplearoundustogotoworkorschoolonfootorbybike.(用what改写句子)Dotoinfluencepeoplearoundustogotoworkorschoolonfootorbybike.whatwecan[妙笔成篇]【参考范文】DearEditor，Recently，thedust­hazeweatherhitthenorthofChinaoverandoveragain，whichhadagreateffectonpeople'slifeandhealth.Asaresult，peoplearebecomingmoreandmoreconcernedaboutourenvironment.Asweallknow，it'sthedevelopmentofindustryandheavytrafficjamsthathavecausedairpollution.Soasateenager，Ithinkitisurgentthatweshouldtakesomemeasurestoprotectourenvironment.Ononehand，we'dbetterlaunchacampaigntoraisepeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Alsowecanholdaspeechcontestaboutprotectingenvironmenttostresstheimportanceoflivingalow­carbonlife.Ontheotherhand，dowhatwecantoinfluencepeoplearoundustogotoworkorschoolonfootorbybike.AsfarasI'mconcerned，everysmallstepwetakereallycounts.Sopleaseremember：together，individualscanmakeadifference.Yours，LiHuaThankyouforwatching!