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晋江市季延中学郑小芬SummaryUsualexpressionsforcontrast:•Yearsagotherewere•Inthepastthereusedtobe•Later…•Now…年份内容1999根据图介绍学校三年间的新变化2001比较减负前后的学习情况2002比较“公园要不要收门票”的两种不同观点2004根据图画比较过去和现在的生活变化情况（北京）对比的两种方式集中比较逐点比较Structure•Beginning•Body•Ending04年春季高考作文：请按照右图的提示写一篇题为“ChangesinOurLife”的英语短文方法指导•Gettheinformation•看图作文思路Changesincommunication变化1变化2Changesinentertainment变化3ChangesinhousingconditionsStructure•Beginning•Body•EndingHereisanessayofastudent•Ifyouweretheteacher,howwouldyougradeit？•GiveyourreasonsChangesinOurLifeOverthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife.Takemyfamilyforexample.Inthepast,mymotherkeepintouchwithherfriendsbywaitingletters.Theycoulddialaphonenumbertomakealongdistancecalltotalkwitheachother.WewatchTVinthesitingroomnowinsteadoflisteningtotheradioasitwasinthepast.Thegreatestchangeisinthelivingcondition.Inthepastwelivedinaverysmallhousewheretherewasfewfurniture.Andthekitchenroom,diningroomandbedroomwereinthesameroom.Itwasverycrowded.Butnow,weliveinaverycomfortablehouse.•Tryyourbesttogivethereasonablemarks.•Whatareyourreasons?ChangesinOurLifeOverthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife.Takemyfamilyforexample.Inthepast,mymotherkeepintouchwithherfriendsbywaitingletters.Theycoulddialaphonenumbertomakealongdistancecalltotalkwitheachother.WewatchTVinthesitingroomnowinsteadoflisteningtotheradioasitwasinthepast.Thegreatestchangeisinthelivingcondition.Inthepastwelivedinaverysmallhousewheretherewasfewfurniture.Andthekitchenroom,diningroomandbedroomwereinthesameroom.Itwasverycrowded.Butnow,weliveinaverycomfortablehouse.keptwritingbutnowBesidessittingtheydidlittleThankstothegovernment,weliveahappylife.16•典型病句•佳句欣赏•习作赏析•范文赏析写作技巧小结•审题，抓点•造句，成文•改错，抄正作业•复习本课要点•完成《高考A计划》P233写作练习•背诵精彩范文Beginning开头常用句型1.Greatchangeshavetakenplace发生了巨大变化2.Thingshavebeguntoimprovesince……自从…以来，事情有了好转/改善。对比常用句型：1…usedto…,butnow…2.…inthepast,butnow…3.Once…,butnow…4.Thingsaredifferentnow.5.Butnow,everythinghaschanged.过渡句可适当变换一些句式：1.Anotherchangeis…Anotherbigchangeisinthehousingconditions.2.What’smore,…/Besides,…What’smore,Icangotobedearlierthaninthepast.Ending结尾常用句型Inshort,changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtuscomfortandconvenience.Inaword,peopleareenjoyinganeasierandmoreconvenientlifeWhatahappylifewearelivingnow!抄改连扩抓审书面表达书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题确定基本要素:5W1H何时何地何人为何如何做了何事书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为确定对比要领Whatchanged?（一图一要点）书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Whodidwhat?注意：时态到位主谓一致书面表达六步法四、连句成文注意：表达到位过渡词首尾呼应书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法六、定稿抄正卷面不工整扣5分集中对比A1B1C1A2B2C2集中说明一个对象的诸种特征逐点比较A1C1B1C2B2A2一条一条地说明两者的异同ChangesInOurLifeOverthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife(主题句).Takemyfamilyforexample(过渡句).Myparentscontactedothersmainlybysendingthemlettersinthepast,butnowwecalllongdistanceathome(对比一).Andoncemyparentslistenedtotheradiofornewsandotherinformation,butnowwewatchthenewsandotherprogramsonTV(对比二).Anotherbigchangeisinthehousingconditions(过渡句).Whentheygotmarriedabouttwentyyearsago,myparentslivedinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture,butnowwehavemovedintoabignewthree-roomapartment(对比三).Inshort,changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtuscomfortandconvenience(总结句).右边两幅图是一位美籍华人所看到的中国妇女地位的变化，请你用第一人称的口吻写一篇短文叙述画中的内容(词数：120左右)提示：上图：在旧中国；下图：在新中国。